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| Subject: The Fighters, The Hiders, and The One. Sat Aug 22, 2009 8:17 pm | |
| If you had the choice of running away when a life was at stake would you? Or would you fight? One girl had to make a tough decision whether to save the life or run from her greatest fear. "When the world was dying the one would fight", said the prophecy. But would she come out of hiding? Before she could fight the evil, she had to find the fairy prince and princess, the prince held the sword to repel evil and the princess possessed the hero's shield, which the hero had used when the power arose 50 years before.
_____________________________ "Z WAKE UP!" "Ok mom," she said. She got dressed and went downstairs. "Honey, did you have that dream again?" her mother asked. "If you mean the one about the little blond haired boy fighting the green skinned human-bull hybrid then yes. But it feels like it is so real." she said. "Maybe it does but it is not real, you know that, right?" her mother siad. "Of course I do," she said with a sigh. "Honey, do me a favor and go up to the attic to get the Christmas lights." "Sure," she said. When she reached the attic door she found that it was sealed so tight, that even with all her might it wouldn't budge. She finally gave up and turned around. Then she heard the door crack open. Z went to open it more but when she did so a burst of wind pushed her away. When the wind died down she walked inside. Z realized that she had never been up in the attic before. She walked inside and saw a picture of herself or someone that looked exactly like her.
Stay tuned for the next chapter of The Fighters, The Hiders, and The One. If you have any comments or ideas that you would like me to add just pm me.
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Sword of faith Clocktown Local
Posts : 39 Join date : 2009-08-23 Age : 28 Location : Great Bay
Character Profile Name: Aroza Race: Zora
| Subject: Re: The Fighters, The Hiders, and The One. Mon Aug 24, 2009 12:41 pm | |
| ~Post fixed, unnecessary text removed~
It does look promising. Keep writing, and remember - always check your grammar and spelling!
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I have already remarked upon this in the suggestions thread, but needless to say, I'm outraged. I'm glad to see that Animelover took my original advice, before it was mutilated
-Sword of faith
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Zeroquest Owner
Posts : 100 Join date : 2009-08-22 Location : Dragon Roost Isle
Character Profile Name: Zero Race: Kokiri
| Subject: Re: The Fighters, The Hiders, and The One. Tue Sep 08, 2009 6:37 pm | |
| It's definitely off to a great start! Can't wait for the next chapter! And as Sof said, be sure to check your spelling and grammar! | |
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